Dude, pretty sweet.
I like the tune a lot, pretty laid back house. I dont see why it has gotten such a low score. But you know how Ng's can be. It gets a nine from me man.
Thanks bro :] Yeah, you know how jealous zero bombers can be ;D haha x
Sacra you whore!
Its been a while dammit, we need to collab and see what kind of clusterfucked lovechild we can make! ROAR!
As for the track, the drums are a bit chaotic but its still good. You just kinda need to EQ the highs and lows to where the beeps are clearer along with the bass. Other than that? Not bad for "I dont do DnB"
To be honest the intro was way too long, and it has no format. However the sounds are great, i think you should keep on working it. Make it longer, and if you want to spin this at a club. You should learn the usual format that every song has. If you listen closely you will see that intros last no more than 30 secs. Then there's usually a drop at 1:30, a buildup. Then build it up into the main song. Then another break at 3:00. Or you can work around that timeline. I hpe it helps. 3/5 7/10
Thanks, your review helped. But this song was not serious at all.
I never thought id see you jump into the house scene, welcome to world of house! ;D Now as for the track, i like the flow of the track even thought sounds very trancey to me. House usually has a groove to it that is mostly achieved with the percussions. And from what i've heard you're starting to work in that which im actually proud of. Usually house is a bit slower though about 130-128. The synths/VST's used are great, and the entire track flows nicely together. Great job!
Keep it up! ;P
Haha. I can actually make house now :P im working on something now that is good.
Im so unpopular now.... I wish i could get it back...
Oh man i havent checked out your stuff in years!
But im loving what i hear so far, i like the fact you're trying to do your own style as well since not many do that. In fact this is what makes the track so good, i myself finally decided to stop trying to make trance and went for Electro House lol. Now as for the track here's what i think.
I love the piano work, im a sucker for piano lines since i play piano myself and i usually try to sneak some piano here and there in my work. Havent done it lately but i love it.
The dark grungy sounds are awesome, gave more depth to the sound and the percussions of the track are loud and snappy. Very crisp. Great job.
The lyrics are unique and the way they are performed gives it a retro sound to it that just catches your attention, maybe if you made them a bit louder would've been great. Some EQ work could do the trick but it still sounds amazing.
Overal 10/10 5/5 Keep it up.
I haven't been making music for years :) don't know what you're talking about.
Haha. Glad to hear you still remember me from long ago though.
Funny thing is, I already had the vocals cranked up pretty high and they were dangerously close to clipping. Boo :(
Leaves me wanting more.
The intro was great in contrast to the main beat, but once the fast beat came in it left me wanting more since the kick almost felt like it was there, it was very muffled. The VsT's and the Synths you chose/made were all great. The song itself was great, but the percussion was just lacking.
I like this a lot, only complaint is the kick distorting the track a bit but perhaps with some compression and EQ work you could make it a bit better so that wont happen. I myself have been having problems on small details like that @_@ Other than that the track is bad ass. Keep up the good work girl ;P
I have an EQing issue. I need a faster computer :(
So every time I try to master I keep hving to save mp3's and its not very efficient
Yarrr! Ae be wishin' ae could be sailin' t' seas wiff t'is fine tune tae sing wiff sing me hearties an' drinkin' some grog! Yer good ol' cap'tn Feathersword an' 'is crew be enjoyin' tae tune alright matey! Ae be raisin' me hook in tae air an' giving' ye tae share o' ae lieutenant on me next raid when me crew and i be pillagin' an' plunderin' tae seas! Yarr! Now i'll be leavin' tae see what crawled out o' tae bung hole an' findin me ae buxom beauty tae drop anchor in 'er lagoon, savvy?
10/10 5/5 +fav.
ZOMGawsh! thanks for the generous review and scores! you totally went all out with the talk like a pirate day :D i just submitted this song for a kiddies contest, but i am pleased it is getting some attention :D THANKS! :D:D:D
I love a lot of the components of this song, the short bass and the leads you used for some of the parts really made this song for me. Specially the way you alternated the notes in the lead made this song a ride, im still working on my house tracks and getting my own sound and this does indeed gives me some ideas for a future track. Nice job dewd.
Nice stuff mon, i know how it feels to have some old work and see it come back to life. Im actually trying to remake one of my older songs into a new one but i get blocked every now and then D:. But overall this song is da bomb Trebble was fine and the mix of all the elemets was actually decent, much better than my crappy EQ skills thats for sure lol. Good job dude.
Thanks much! :D
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